Hey, I can totally relate to your confession. Itis probably a very similar story for may of us young folks. The revision I made are minor. When I was reading, your peice I felt the need for more transtions to continue the follow of your thoughts. I rearraged some your sentences to follow a more retorical development of sentences and ideas. Hey, I think you became and great comic book writer. By the way, what is your screen play/comic about.
You can read over your revision and tell me whay you think.
I change very little. Tell me what you think.
I have a confession. I started college immedialtly after High school. I really didn’t know what I was doing. When I come to think it, I don’t know if their was any wisdom in starting college without a clear and crisp vision. I didn’t start college with a five year plan or even a one year plan. I was’nt planning on being a self made millionare by the age of 25. I was still finding myself. The one thing I knew for sure is that did not know what I wanted to do. I kind of had an approach to my initial college moments but not really.
Despite initially wanted to work with large cats (not like Nicole's cats mind you, but Lions or Tigers...or bears, oh my), I had always been fascinated with sharks and dolphins, and thought maybe Marine Bio would be a better fit. I took some Biology and marine Biology classes and as it turned out I loved science. However, I just wasn't very good at it. It's really ironic. I love Michio Kaku, Super String, and anything by Sagan, but academically science just isn't for me. I dropped a few classes here or there on my way to my AA, and I even failed a basic Speech class simply because instead of taking the final, I decided it was more important to see Price at the St. Pete Times forum (it was rumored he wasn;t going to play any of his old stuff anymore, so who could miss it up?) It was silly in retrospect, but I can't say I regret it. It was around this time I decided that I wanted to write comics. Comics have always received a bad reputation as a kid's medium and it's quite tragic. There's probably more talent and enthralling emotional storytelling in modern comics than in most novels people read; it's one of the most under appreciated mediums I've found. This desire evolved from a screen play I was writing. About 35 or so pages into it, I realized it would have made a great graphic novel and better yet an ongoing series. I tweaked and edited that screenplay I was writing and I've begun to turn it into...well, the beginning of a comic. If I could find an illustrator, I'd be in much better shape, regardless, some exerpts can be found here.
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