Hey, I can totally relate to your confession. Itis probably a very similar story for may of us young folks. The revision I made are minor. When I was reading, your peice I felt the need for more transtions to continue the follow of your thoughts. I rearraged some your sentences to follow a more retorical development of sentences and ideas. Hey, I think you became and great comic book writer. By the way, what is your screen play/comic about.

You can read over your revision and tell me whay you think.
I change very little. Tell me what you think.

I have a confession. I started college immedialtly after High school. I really didn’t know what I was doing. When I come to think it, I don’t know if their was any wisdom in starting college without a clear and crisp vision. I didn’t start college with a five year plan or even a one year plan. I was’nt planning on being a self made millionare by the age of 25. I was still finding myself. The one thing I knew for sure is that did not know what I wanted to do. I kind of had an approach to my initial college moments but not really.

My plan was to take two classes to sort of test the collegiate waters. My very first college classes were Comp 1 Honors and World Religions “two great course to get my feet wet”. The World Religions class was interesting yet, It was taught by a man with a very thick, hard to understand South African accent (I assume it was South African; I really won’t know.). Needless to say, I dropped my world religion class and, I did fairly well in my English composition. Not a great starting record, I'll admit. I wasn't too thrilled with College to start with yet, I always thought I would be.
I was one of the people who thought High School was geared toward the kids who didn't want to be there, and it was infuriating. I had always appreciated education. Regardless, I took the next two or so years off to just work and give myself a break from High School and from my first semester of college. The real reason I took the break was to find out what I wanted it to do. I started back at SPC [I am not sure what SPC stands for your audience might not know either. I guess the rule of them is to spell out The word first and in parathernes give the abbreviation you are going to use] around 2003, with a focus toward Computer Science. My thoughts to my self were “I good with computers, and there's definitely money to be made here, so what the heck.” But really, a semester or so in, I realized two things. First, that I didn't want to be stuck behind a desk for the rest of my life. Second, I was really loved working with animals, so I switched to biology.

Despite initially wanted to work with large cats (not like Nicole's cats mind you, but Lions or Tigers...or bears, oh my), I had always been fascinated with sharks and dolphins, and thought maybe Marine Bio would be a better fit. I took some Biology and marine Biology classes and as it turned out I loved science. However, I just wasn't very good at it. It's really ironic. I love Michio Kaku, Super String, and anything by Sagan, but academically science just isn't for me. I dropped a few classes here or there on my way to my AA, and I even failed a basic Speech class simply because instead of taking the final, I decided it was more important to see Price at the St. Pete Times forum (it was rumored he wasn;t going to play any of his old stuff anymore, so who could miss it up?) It was silly in retrospect, but I can't say I regret it. It was around this time I decided that I wanted to write comics. Comics have always received a bad reputation as a kid's medium and it's quite tragic. There's probably more talent and enthralling emotional storytelling in modern comics than in most novels people read; it's one of the most under appreciated mediums I've found. This desire evolved from a screen play I was writing. About 35 or so pages into it, I realized it would have made a great graphic novel and better yet an ongoing series. I tweaked and edited that screenplay I was writing and I've begun to turn it into...well, the beginning of a comic. If I could find an illustrator, I'd be in much better shape, regardless, some exerpts can be found here.


Page Information

  • 2 years ago [history]
  • View page source
  • You're not logged in
  • No tags yet learn more

Wiki Information

Recent PBwiki Blog Posts